this was really good
but..with the lip synch, i kept getting distracted by her tongue poking out, it made it hard to focus on anything but that
that was very well done
i liked the end
"YOU'RE NOT ALFRED"
good work i really enjoyed it
i think this was a good sprite animation, the fight scene was very well done
now onto the criticism
it needed a loading screen, most viewers wont take animations seriously if it doesnt have a loading screen
try and develop a little bit more of a story, i know how it feels wanting to go straight to the action but hold off on it a bit
leave the text on the screen a little bit longer, it was a little bit hard to read when it flashed by so quickly
other than those few points it was a very well made animation, i can see you have a lot of potential,
noted. i have much work to do...i'll admit that this is way better then what i use to do.
the only thing i didnt like was the fact that if you died it was game over
perhaps a checkpoint or something would have been nice
that pickleman at the start loading screen is an edited superman sprite
it needs some way to toggle the quality, my computer is too slow to handle the high quality, so could you please incorproate that some way, i couldnt be bother waiting for the arms to get goo'ed cos it took like ages to do.
ah man i love this, it reminds me of elevator music!
good work aye!
Ahoy there matey !
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