this was really good
but..with the lip synch, i kept getting distracted by her tongue poking out, it made it hard to focus on anything but that
that was very well done
i liked the end
"YOU'RE NOT ALFRED"
good work i really enjoyed it
i think this was a good sprite animation, the fight scene was very well done
now onto the criticism
it needed a loading screen, most viewers wont take animations seriously if it doesnt have a loading screen
try and develop a little bit more of a story, i know how it feels wanting to go straight to the action but hold off on it a bit
leave the text on the screen a little bit longer, it was a little bit hard to read when it flashed by so quickly
other than those few points it was a very well made animation, i can see you have a lot of potential,
noted. i have much work to do...i'll admit that this is way better then what i use to do.
that was very well done, i like what you did
thats amazing dude, be proud
slackwii got owned
THIS IS PURE BRILLIANCE
WATCHING THIS MAKES ME CRY WITH JOY
its so moving
hes singing it for a loved one, gabby
hes so passionate about what hes doing
the symbolism is superb
and the little man at the end, i can tell it shows the bond between you and your son
you sir, are a genius
and the song, it makes me smile
ignore the last guy
i thought it was good, and the last guy has obviously never heard of an elimination tag, now whos a dumbass shyguy?
firstly, arent you supposed to close brackets when you use them? and why would someone send a postcard for their birthday?
dont they use Birthday cards?, shows how intelligent you are, you tried to mock this guy for trying to get his work out there, and you ended up making a cock of yourself
it was good, but
it was good but, your imitation of Bob from webl and bob, was horrible, no offence but it sounded nothin like em. work on that
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